2nd draft requires correction

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Draft 2 for the Advocacy Project should be a minimum of 2,500 words (this is the minimum word count for the final draft).

Submit your multimodal composition as an MS Word file, following MLA citation format.

Include a specific title and a bibliography (no annotations, please).

I’ll be focusing my comments on the following aspects:

  • Introduction and thesis statements
  • Paragraph cohesion (one controlling idea)
  • Use of multimodality