writing experience 4 problem solution argument

this was what my writing should be related about. i wrote this before this writing steps.

One thing i dislike about education system is how students are compelled to buy unnecessary materials for the course. I have had a class that required me to buy expensive books and i never even used them. And second thing i do not support is the loads of general mandatory courses required in four year college. Some of this course are waste of money and time. It is good to expand our skill and knowledge but some classes like arts, music does not help much to know that subject just with one basic class. i took a music class and i do not even remember what i learnt from the class and, it has nothing to do with my major.

My audience will be teacher and school board.