edits for research paper about fluency disorder stuttering in preschool age 4 7

For the final draft, you will need to HIGHLIGHT any changes you make, or use the “track changes” option in Word to write comments about the changes you made. Only highlighted changes and/or comments about your revisions will be considered for your final draft.

https://screencast-o-matic.com/watch/cqhQYgZNvL

Please follow the Link to see all specific comments and do the edits accordingly!

I hope I get better this time. please let me know if you have any questions